The rain on the tin roof sounded like gunfire. Malone had heard that sound before — real gunfire, in the streets of East LA, in the alleys behind the bars on Main Street — and for a moment, standing in the back door of the Pink Flamingo with water dripping from the brim of his hat, he thought he was back there.

The Pink Flamingo had burned down three nights ago. The papers said it was an electrical fire. Malone knew better. He could smell the cordite underneath the smoke — sharp, metallic, unmistakable. Someone had set this place on purpose, and they had used something stronger than kerosene.

He followed the smell down a collapsed staircase into the basement. The swimming pool was dry — cracked concrete, twenty feet deep, filled with debris and rat bones and the charred remains of what had once been lounge furniture. And there, in the corner, a woman.

She was sitting against the tiles, her side dark with blood. She was conscious. Her left eye was clouded and white — blind. Her right eye was sharp and black and fixed on him with an intensity that made him stop breathing for a second.

On the edge of the pool, a porcelain baby doll. One eye missing. The other staring at Malone like a blind god.

"You're the detective," she said. Not a question.

"I was looking for her," Malone said. "I found you instead."

"That's what they always say." She coughed, and blood ran from the corner of her mouth onto her white collar. "Sit down. You're blocking my light."

He sat. The tiles were cold through his trousers. He looked at her — late twenties, dark hair pulled back in a severe knot, dress torn at the shoulder, blood soaking through the fabric. She was beautiful in the way that damaged things are beautiful — not pretty, not attractive, but compelling, the way a broken window is compelling because it lets you see something you were not supposed to see.

"What's your name?" he asked.

"Evelyn Marsh."

"Where's 'her'?"

"Dead. Or dying. I don't know. I left her at the Flamingo before the fire started."

"Who killed her?"

"No one killed her. She killed herself. She couldn't live with what she saw."

"Like you?"

She looked at him. The good eye was steady. "I'm not dead yet, detective. Though I might be by morning."

He looked at the doll. "What's that?"

"Don't touch it."

He didn't. "Is that what I think it is?"

"It's a baby doll. Porcelain. Painted by hand. Worth about twelve dollars at a department store." She smiled, and the smile was bloody and beautiful and sad. "Unless you know how to open it."

He reached out and pressed the wrong button on the doll's belly. Nothing happened. He pressed the right one — the head popped off, and inside, wrapped in tissue paper, a strip of microfilm no wider than a thread.

He held it up to the dim light from the staircase. He could not read it. But he knew what it was.

Sirens. Distant, but getting closer. Malone looked at Evelyn. She had heard them too. Her good eye met his.

"They will keep coming," she said. "Until they have it. Or until they have me."

He picked up the doll. He offered her his hand. She looked at it. Then she looked at the pool — thirty feet long, twenty feet wide, cracked and filled with the detritus of a life that ended in fire and blood.

"I can't walk," she said.

"I know."

"Then you'll have to carry me."

"I can't."

"I know that too."

She was silent for a long time. The sirens were louder now. She reached out and touched the doll — the one with the microfilm inside. "Who is this for?" she asked.

"What?"

"The film. Who is it for?"

Malone hesitated. "Everyone."

"No one," she said. "That's the problem."

She stood. She walked to the edge of the pool. Malone followed. "Don't," he said. She looked back at him. "You took the doll. That means you're still in this. I'm not." She stepped into the pool. The tiles were cracked under her bare feet. She sat down on the edge, legs dangling over the dark, and folded her hands in her lap. "Tell them I jumped. Tell them I couldn't live with what I saw. Tell them whatever keeps them from looking at the doll."

Malone reached for her. She shook her head. "You have a job to do, detective. Don't waste it on me."

She let go.

He stood at the edge of the pool for a long time. Then he picked up a stack of old bricks from the corner and began to build a wall across the entrance. He did not cry. He had been doing this kind of work for twenty years. He knew how it ends.

He walked out of the Pink Flamingo into the Los Angeles rain. The doll was in his coat pocket. The sirens were behind him, getting closer. He did not know who to trust — the cops on the payroll, the politicians with names on film, the gangsters who would kill him for looking at the wrong thing. He knew only one thing: Evelyn Marsh was at the bottom of a dry pool in a burned-out nightclub, and somewhere in his pocket was a strip of film that could burn the whole city down.

He got into his car, started the engine, and drove into the rain. Behind him, the wall of bricks held. For now.

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