Loretta's hands were shaking when she played the piano. Not from the whiskey -- though she had two fingers of it in a glass on top of the piano, and a third one coming -- but from the pain. Her shoulder had been dislocated since Tuesday, and the doctor at the clinic had said it would set itself right eventually. Which is what doctors in Detroit always said in 1947. Eventually.

Jack Monroe sat in the back booth of the bar, listening to her play a blues he had never heard before, and tried to decide if he was in love with her or just too tired to care which.

The bartender, a man named Gus who had seen everything Detroit had to offer and remained unimpressed by none of it, set a glass of bourbon on Jack's table without being asked.

"How's the cough?" Gus asked.

"Worse."

"Figures."

They sat in silence for a while. Loretta finished her song and walked over, sliding into the booth next to Jack. Her shoulder was wrapped in a scarf she had stolen from the hotel where she used to perform before Detroit went to hell.

"You look like hell," she said.

"Good night," Jack replied.

"Serious. You're coughing blood into your handkerchief again. I saw it on the way over."

Jack reached for his glass. His hand was empty. He had finished the whiskey without remembering doing it.

"I went to the doctor today."

Loretta went very still. She had known this day was coming. They all had. Detroit in 1947 was a town full of people who knew they were dying and had no plan for it.

"What did he say?"

"He said my lungs have been damaged. He said seven months. Maybe less."

Loretta took his hand. Her fingers were cold. "You're going to find a way."

Jack looked at her. "There is no way, Loretta. This is Detroit. The best doctor in town told me to rest and take cod liver oil. That's the treatment."

She didn't let go of his hand. "Then we find a better doctor."

There was a floating platform on Lake Erie called Paradise Pier. Jack had heard about it from a guy at the delivery warehouse who said his cousin's brother knew a guy who had been up there. Paradise Pier was a converted oil rig that Victor Kline had turned into a floating mansion, complete with a private hospital, a restaurant that served real steak, and a medical laboratory that had treatments you could not get anywhere on earth.

"You can't just go up there," Loretta said when he told her his plan. "It's owned by Kline. He doesn't let just anyone on."

"Then I won't be just anyone."

"You'll get killed."

"Then I'll get killed."

She stared at him for a long time. The bar was half-empty. A jazz band played in the corner. Loretta's daughter, Peggy, was at home with a neighbor, asleep in a bed that faced a wall because the apartment didn't have enough rooms.

"Do it," she said.

Jack sailed to Paradise Pier on a supply barge at dawn, his stomach full of cheap coffee and his pocket full of forged papers he had bought from a guy behind the railway station. The pier rose out of the morning fog like something from another world. White paint, glass windows, flags on tall poles. It looked like a hotel from a magazine, the kind of magazine that nobody in Detroit could afford to buy.

He got a job as a maintenance hand. Not because he was qualified -- he wasn't -- but because he looked desperate, and desperate men are useful when you need someone to do work that nobody else wants to do.

The first week, Jack cleaned the decks and repaired the railings and said nothing to anyone. He was not a talker by nature. He watched. He listened. He watched the doctors come and go in white coats, carrying medical equipment and laughing about things Jack would never understand. He listened to the maintenance crew talk about the patients -- wealthy men and women from Detroit, Cleveland, Chicago -- who came to Paradise Pier for "special treatments" that cost more than Jack's annual earnings.

On the tenth day, he was assigned to help move medical waste to the disposal area. He did not ask what "medical waste" meant. He did not want to know.

The disposal area was in the aft section of the pier, a room with a large tank and a series of pipes leading into it. Jack watched the technicians connect bags of blood to the pipes, watch the blood flow into the tank, and watch the tank pump its contents into a machine that processed it into clear vials.

He had been on Paradise Pier for ten days and he had seen the treatment vials. He knew what they looked like. He now understood what they were made of.

Poor people's blood. Collected through free health clinics on the mainland, where working-class people came voluntarily and gave blood in exchange for "free health screenings" that were really blood draws. The blood was processed on Paradise Pier and sold back to the wealthy at prices that made Victor Kline's fortune grow by millions every quarter.

Jack sat down on a crate of medical supplies and felt something shift in his chest. Not anger. He had been angry his whole life and anger had never solved anything in Detroit. This was something else. This was the cold, hard recognition of a system so fundamentally corrupt that it fed on the poor and spat them out, and called it progress.

He stole a vial.

He hid it in his boot, walked to the supply barge, and sailed back to Detroit in the early morning. The lake was gray and flat. The sky was the color of a wet sidewalk. Jack sat in the barge's small cabin and held the vial in his hand and thought about Loretta's shaking hands on the piano and Peggy's leukemia and all the other people in Detroit whose blood was currently flowing through a pipe on a floating platform, being turned into money.

He gave the vial to Loretta that evening. She looked at it like it was a miracle, which it was.

"I don't know how to use this," she said.

"Neither do I. But the guy in the lab had a syringe next to it. So it's injected."

She nodded and took the vial to her apartment. Jack waited outside. He stood on the street across from her building and watched her window for two hours, standing in the cold, smoking a cigarette he could barely taste.

When she came out, she was not smiling. She was crying.

"They arrested her," she said.

Jack walked across the street. "Who?"

"Peggy. They arrested Peggy. She used the medication without a prescription. Kline's lawyers called it an 'unapproved substance.' They're charging her with medical fraud."

Jack felt the world go very quiet. It was the kind of quiet that comes before something breaks.

"Where is she?"

"The precinct on Woodward. They're holding her overnight."

Jack didn't go to the precinct. He went to a bar on Jefferson Avenue and drank three bourbons and sat in the dark and thought about Victor Kline.

He found Kline at a different bar, the Grand Concourse on Cadillac Square. Kline was alone, which was unusual for a man who normally moved with a retinue of lawyers and bodyguards. Tonight, Kline was drinking bourbon and reading a newspaper, a man who had just spent his evening away from the machinery of his empire and was enjoying the rare luxury of being nobody.

Jack sat down next to him and ordered a whiskey.

"Can I help you?" Kline asked, not looking up from his paper.

"My name is Jack Monroe. My partner's daughter has leukemia. The treatment I got her was taken away by your lawyers. She's in jail."

Kline lowered the newspaper. He was a tall man with a face that had been handsome once, like a building that had been well-maintained and was now showing its age.

"I understand your frustration, Mr. Monroe. But the law is the law. Unapproved substances --"

"Your blood farm is the law?"

Kline's expression did not change. "I don't know what you're talking about."

"The blood. The pipes. The poor people who donate blood at your 'free clinics' and get nothing in return while you sell it back to them at a hundred times the price."

Kline set down his newspaper. He looked at Jack with the calm, reasonable expression of a man who was used to explaining difficult things to simple people.

"Mr. Monroe, my clinics provide free health screenings to thousands of people in this city. The blood that is drawn is processed and used to create life-saving medications that are sold to those who can afford them. The revenue from those sales funds the clinics. It is a self-sustaining system."

"It's a system that feeds on poor people."

"It's a system that works."

Jack looked at this man, this man who floated above the city and called it progress, and he felt something snap in his chest. Not rage. Not passion. Just a wire, thin and frayed, that had been holding together for forty-one years and finally gave out.

He pulled the gun from his coat and put it on the bar.

"Pick it up," he said.

Kline looked at the gun, then at Jack. "I suggest you put that away."

"Pick it up."

Kline picked up the gun. His hands were steady. Of course they were steady. He was Victor Kline.

"You don't know how to use that," he said.

"I just did. I know exactly how to use it."

They stared at each other across the bar. The jazz band in the corner had stopped playing. The bartender was cleaning a glass and pretending not to listen.

"You're going to kill me," Kline said. It was not a question. It was a statement of fact, the kind of fact he would state in a board meeting or a court of law.

Jack's hand was on the gun. He was shaking. Not from fear -- from the coughing that was building in his chest like a storm, the four months of black lung and wasted time and Detroit's infinite capacity to grind good people into dust.

"Yes," he said.

Kline nodded. "Then do it. You'll spend the rest of your life in prison, and I'll be dead, and nobody will care. That's Detroit, Mr. Monroe. Nobody cares."

Jack shot him.

The bullet went through Kline's chest, not his heart -- Jack was not a good shot, and his hands were still shaking. Kline looked down at the blood spreading through his white shirt with the same expression he had used to explain his blood farm, calm and reasonable and utterly without surprise.

Then he fell.

Jack walked out of the bar and walked six blocks to the police station on Camp Avenue. He walked through streets that were dark and wet and empty, the way Detroit streets are at 3 AM when nothing good has happened and nothing good is going to happen.

He walked into the police station, sat down at the front desk, and stared at a water stain on the ceiling.

The desk sergeant looked up. "Can I help you?"

"I shot a man."

"What?"

"I shot Victor Kline. At the Grand Concourse."

The sergeant picked up his phone. "Dispatch, I need a --"

Jack closed his eyes. He thought about Loretta in her apartment with Peggy's empty bed. He thought about the pipes on Paradise Pier, carrying blood through the night. He thought about the lake, gray and flat and indifferent.

He was not a hero. He had not saved anyone. He had killed one man and lost the woman he loved and the daughter who had never done anything to deserve any of this.

The water stain on the ceiling was shaped like a face. He stared at it until the police came.

In the morning, the newspapers called it a "tragic incident." Loretta was released from custody after eighteen hours, but Peggy's treatment had already been delayed beyond recovery. The Paradise Pier blood farm was not mentioned in any of the papers. Victor Kline's lawyers issued a statement saying he was "a beloved member of the Detroit community."

Jack sat in a cell and listened to the other prisoners sleep and thought about the water stain on the ceiling and wondered if it was still there, or if someone had painted over it by now.

Some stains, he had learned, are permanent.

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