The Weight of Dirt
I.
Donna drove her truck to the edge of town. Black Ridge Mine was there. The entrance was a hole in the hill with beer cans around it. She got out. She walked to the entrance. She yelled into the dark. She yelled about Pam. About everything. The sound went down and came back. That's all. She waited for something to happen. Nothing happened. She lit a cigarette. She went back to her truck.
II.
Old Tom was sitting by his tent when she came out. He was sorting through a pile of aluminum cans. "You yellin' at somebody?" he said.
"No," Donna said.
"You were." He went back to sorting cans. Donna stood there. She didn't know why she was standing there. Old Tom talked without looking at her. He told her about Pam. Not that he knew her. He knew about her. Eight years ago, when the plant closed and half the town lost their jobs, Pam started going to the nursing home. Every night after work. Sat with the old people. Talked to them. Read to them. One guy—blind, couldn't speak right—Pam sat with him every day for two years until he died.
"She don't get paid for it," Old Tom said.
Donna looked at her cigarette. It was burning down to the filter.
III.
Donna drove home. She took the old mining road—it wasn't a road, it was a slope of loose coal and dirt that used to carry cars up from the mine. She was thinking about Pam. She wasn't thinking about Pam in a nice way. She was thinking about Pam the way you think about something you can't stand. She hit a patch of loose dirt. Her truck slid. She hit the ground. Not hard. Hard enough. Her ankle twisted. She couldn't stand. The sky was gray. The town was gray. Everything was gray. She lay there for a while. Then she heard a truck. It stopped. Pam got out. Of course it was Pam. Pam didn't say anything. She knelt down. She put Donna's arm over her shoulder. Donna weighed about a hundred and forty pounds. Pam weighed about a hundred and ten. They moved. Slowly. Down the slope. Pam's breathing was loud. Donna didn't say anything. Pam didn't say anything.
IV.
Donna sat at Pam's kitchen table. Pam made tea. They sat in silence. The kitchen was small. The walls were thin. You could hear the TV in the next apartment. Donna looked at Pam's hands. They were shaking. From carrying her. Pam looked at Donna. Donna looked at Pam. Neither of them said the thing that needed to be said. Pam refilled Donna's cup. Donna drank. That's the whole story. That's all there is.
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