The Geometry of Waiting

The parking lot at the Price Chopper on Joslin Avenue had fifteen empty spaces on a Wednesday morning in November. Lena Kowalski counted them because there was nothing else to count. Fifteen spaces. One was taken by a minivan with a dent in the rear bumper. The other fourteen were empty in the way that empty things in parking lots are empty���waiting to be filled, indifferent to the filling.

Lena parked in space number nine, which was nearest to the automatic doors and furthest from the wind. Detroit wind in November doesn't blow. It occupies. It finds a space beside you and stays there until you have no space left.

She pushed through the automatic doors and started down aisle four, where they kept the dental supplies. Not the kind of dental supplies that dentists use for patients. The warehouse supplies. Boxes of gloves. Cartons of麻嘴杯���the little paper cups. Bags for X-rays. All of it moving slowly down the packing line, one box after another, each one identical to the last.

Sarah Mitchell was on line four today. Sarah was new���three weeks, maybe four. She was young, twenty at most, with a face that was still figuring itself out and a manner that suggested she expected people to be interested in her and was surprised when they weren't.

Patterson walked the floor occasionally. His shoes made a sound that was almost a click but not quite���a soft, heavy sound, the sound of a man who had been walking floors for twenty years and had not walked far enough to matter.

"Donna's on line four," he told her on a Tuesday. "She's quick. Faster than you. Don't take it personal."

Sarah didn't respond. She had learned, over eight months of this job, that responding to Patterson was like talking to a wall that talked back in a voice designed to irritate. She kept her hands moving. Boxes. Tape. Label. Repeat.

Donna Harris was on line four, her hands moving fast over the boxes, her face arranged into an expression of concentration that was almost convincing. Patterson was standing behind her, saying something. She was nodding.

Tom O'Brien was sitting across from her in the break room, eating a sausage roll that he had brought from home. He was a quiet man���not shy, exactly, but deliberate in his speech, the way a person is deliberate when they have learned that most things are not worth the words they require.

"Patterson's there a lot," she said.

Tom took a bite of his sausage roll and chewed slowly. "Yeah."

"Does it bother you?"

He looked at her. His eyes were grey���a flat, steady grey, like the sky in November. "Bother me how?"

"I don't know. Does it bother you that he's��� I don't know. Showing her favours?"

Tom shrugged. "Favours don't pay the rent."

That's not an answer.

It's the only one that matters.

She ate her sandwich in silence. It was ham and cheese on white bread, bought from the shop on the corner because the shop on the corner was cheaper than the one two streets over. She had been buying from the corner shop for eight months. She knew its prices better than she knew the prices at the supermarket.

The phone rang in the flat at seven-thirty, half an hour after her shift ended, half an hour after she had gotten home, half an hour after she had started heating a tin of soup on the stove.

"Lena?" It was the hospital. "This is about your brother. We need to discuss his treatment plan."

She listened. She nodded, although they couldn't see her nod. She said yes and no and how much and when, and when she hung up, she sat at the kitchen table and looked at the wall across from her and tried to figure out if the new treatment plan was more money or less money or the same money in a different shape.

It was more money. It was always more money.

She went back to the warehouse the next morning at five-thirty, which was thirty minutes early, because she needed the extra hours and Patterson liked people who arrived early because it made him feel important.

Donna was already on the line, her hands moving fast over the boxes, her face arranged into an expression of concentration that was almost convincing. Patterson was standing behind her, saying something.

Tom arrived at six, shook out his hands, and started work on line two without saying anything to anyone. He and Lena had developed, over eight months, a system of communication that required fewer than ten words per shift. A nod. A glance. A pause that meant more than a sentence would.

One evening in November���a Wednesday, the kind of Wednesday that is indistinguishable from any other Wednesday except that it is colder and darker and the sky is grey from three in the afternoon���her brother said, at the kitchen table, where he sat most evenings with a cup of tea that he did not finish:

"I'm glad you're here, Lena."

She looked at him. He was looking at his hands, which were resting on the table, still and motionless in a way that was different from the way his hands had been resting six months ago. Six months ago, they had trembled. Now they were still.

"I'm here," she said.

"It's not much," he said. "Being here. But it's something."

She picked up his hand and held it. His fingers were thin and warm. "It's enough," she said.

And it was. Not a lot. Not the kind of enough that appears in stories with happy endings. But enough. Enough to sit at a kitchen table in a flat in the East End and hold your brother's hand and watch the light go grey and know that tomorrow you would wake up and go to the warehouse and work and come home and sit at this table and hold his hand again.

Enough.

The warehouse changed���not dramatically, not immediately, but in the small ways that matter: the ventilation was improved, the line speed was reduced by fifteen percent, the restrooms were cleaned daily instead of weekly. Patterson walked the floor with a different expression on his face���not angry, exactly, but diminished. The way a man feels when he realizes that the power he thought he had was an illusion.

Tom and Lena continued to work. They continued to communicate in glances and nods and pauses. They continued to pay for the brother's treatment and buy ham and cheese sandwiches from the corner shop and come home at six in the evening and sit in the flat and watch the light change over the docklands.

One Thursday, Lena walked past the corner store. Mark Donovan was inside, buying coffee. She walked past. She did not go in. The next Thursday, she might.

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